Narrative Questions
· I feel that my narrative is fairly engaging to the reader, although it may be able to be increased by being more descriptive.
· My narrative is very sequential, there is a clear timeline.
· My narrative could use a little more description, although it is decently strong in this area.
· My narrative is especially strong in presenting important changes.
· My narrative is told from my point of view.
· The question of “How relevant is the story today?” is probably the weakest part of my narrative. This needs to be addressed.
· I feel that my narrative presents a central idea (being that my mom has continually sacrificed in order to raise me).
Here's my thoughts (Brandon)
ReplyDelete1) The strengths of your essay is that you use strong, vivid language and that you use very good descriptive detail and very well sensory detail.
2) The only thing you need to add is suspense to the narrative to add a little more climax in the story.
3) No literary devices used you could add some in your paper.
4) the most important part of your paper is your ending. The ending is great and leaves the reader with how much of an impact your mom has in your life.