1. My friends came over, and we all piled into the car.
a. My friends scurried into the house, laughing and talking loudly. “What are you waiting for?” Tyler says, “I’m hungry, lets eat!.” My friends run out the door to pile in my car just as quickly as they had run in. I want to run too, but first have to pick up the 10 pound lug of a baby doll.
2. These people were giving me rude looks and forming judgments about me because they thought I was a teenage mom.
a. I can feel all of the eyes. The judgmental, critical eyes all staring at me. “Why would she let that happen to her?” they say in their heads as they gawk in disgust. It is one of the most dreadful feelings I have ever had.
3. As I am walking around the mall, picturing myself in the different outfits, a loud, almost inhuman wail penetrates my ears. Looking around, trying to see what was causing the racket, I finally look down and realize it is the baby doll, screeching away.
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